Bulky Trash Day
Aug 25, 2015 17:44
Today was bulky trash day for our university, and I enjoyed it because we could get the trash.
There were many nice bulky trash in the dumping ground, for example, Power Mac G4, G5, laptops of ASUS, and PCs of Dell.
Eventually, I got about ten PCs.
All the PCs were very old ones, but I like to fiddle around with old PCs, so I'm happy.
Also, my boss got a vacuum cleaner of Dyson.
He looks so happy.
There were many nice bulky trash in the dumping ground, for example, Power Mac G4, G5, laptops of ASUS, and PCs of Dell.
Eventually, I got about ten PCs.
All the PCs were very old ones, but I like to fiddle around with old PCs, so I'm happy.
Also, my boss got a vacuum cleaner of Dyson.
He looks so happy.
今日は大学の粗大ごみの日で、捨てられたものは貰うことができるため、楽しかったです。
ゴミ捨て場には、Power Mac の G4 や G5、ASUS のノートパソコンや DELL のパソコンなど、素敵なものが沢山捨てられていました。
最終的に、私は10台程のパソコンを手に入れました。
全て古いパソコンですが、私は古いパソコンを触るのが好きなので、幸せです。
また、私の先生はダイソンの掃除機を手に入れていました。
とても嬉しそうでした。
ゴミ捨て場には、Power Mac の G4 や G5、ASUS のノートパソコンや DELL のパソコンなど、素敵なものが沢山捨てられていました。
最終的に、私は10台程のパソコンを手に入れました。
全て古いパソコンですが、私は古いパソコンを触るのが好きなので、幸せです。
また、私の先生はダイソンの掃除機を手に入れていました。
とても嬉しそうでした。
No. 1 Timmy's correction
- Today was bulky trash day for our university, and I enjoyed it because we could get the trash.
- Today was bulky trash day for our university, and I enjoyed it because we could (or: were able to) lay our hands on some electronic junk.
- There were many nice bulky trash in the dumping ground, for example, Power Mac G4, G5, laptops of ASUS, and PCs of Dell.
- There were many nice bulky trash (items) in the dumping ground, for example, Power Mac G4, G5, laptops of ASUS, and PCs of Dell.
Nice catch!^_^
kanotown
Thank you very much always for correcting my post!
Yes, I'm surrounded by treasures. :D
Thank you very much always for correcting my post!
Yes, I'm surrounded by treasures. :D
Timmy
You are welcome!^_^
You are welcome!^_^
No. 2 Bull's correction
- Today was bulky trash day for our university, and I enjoyed it because we could get the trash.
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Today was bulky trash day for our university, and I enjoyed it because we could get old thelec tronicash.
Hmm I think saying trash is weird at the end because it sounds like you are happy to get any trash (food, magazines, papers, etc.) You should specify instead.
- He looks so happy.
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He lookeds so happy.
Since you wrote でした, it should be past tense too.
Wow i want to get old electronics! I need to learn computers more for IT
kanotown
Thank you very much for correcting me! :)
It's not comfortable to use old electronics, but we can learn a lot from them! So I love them.
Thank you very much for correcting me! :)
It's not comfortable to use old electronics, but we can learn a lot from them! So I love them.
Bull
Sorry if it is hard to read. I used my phone yesterday and it looks confusing!
Sorry if it is hard to read. I used my phone yesterday and it looks confusing!